Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Swimming pool

Evelyn studied in a school where they had extra curriculum every Tuesday. On Tuesday, the girls would have their swimming class. Unfortunately, Evelyn wasn’t the best swimmer in her class and would usual almost drown to her death.

One day, Evelyn’s swimming class was having a swimming test. Evelyn’s name was involved in the test. Evelyn pleaded to the teacher to replace her name with someone else’s name.

“I’m sorry but I can’t.” Said Evelyn’s swimming teacher as the teacher walked away.

A week later…
The swimming test was held at a deep pool. Evelyn’s face turned pale when she saw how deep the pool was. The other girls went into the pool as soon as they wore their swimming suits. When the other girls went into the pool, they made it look like the pool was very deep. One of the girls dived into the pool and didn’t come back up for a while. Evelyn was about to scream when the girl that dived, came back up, laughing.

“Good luck during the swimming test shorty! Hahaha! You’ll never survive inside that pool.” Teased the girl that dived. Her name was Vera.

Evelyn looked at herself. Vera was quiet right. Evelyn was short.

“Hey! Don’t tease her!” Shouted Evelyn’s friend towards Vera. Evelyn’s friend was named Jessica.

Vera just rolled her big eyes and walked away.

When the swimming test started, Evelyn was scared of drowning. She always felt like she wouldn’t survive in such a deep pool. Fortunately, the teacher that was going to watch Evelyn swim was a very kind teacher. She would always help her students in need. The teacher introduced herself to the students. The teacher’s name was Elizabeth.

“If any of you need anything, just shout out my name.” Said Miss Elizabeth.

Evelyn was relieved to have a very kind teacher.

“Evelyn you’re up!” Shouted Evelyn’s swimming instructor.

Evelyn looked around to see if Miss Elizabeth was around. When Evelyn saw Miss Elizabeth waiting for her to swim, she was delighted. Evelyn got ready, jumped into the water, and swam. Miss Elizabeth looked at how Evelyn swam. To Miss Elizabeth, Evelyn was quiet good.

Suddenly, while Evelyn was swimming, Evelyn felt something trying to pull her into the swimming pool.

“What was that?” Asked Evelyn to herself as she kept on swimming. Again, something tried to pull Evelyn. But Evelyn wasn’t pulled down.

Suddenly when Evelyn wasn’t expecting something to happen, she got pulled again. Since that she didn’t expect it, she got pulled down.

“Evelyn!” Shouted Miss Elizabeth as she dived into the pool. Minutes later, Miss Elizabeth didn’t come up to the surface either.

The other students were terrified. Some of them got pulled down too while the others, were lucky to swim very fast and reached the surface. Among the ones that were to get to the surface was Vera and Jessica.

A week later, investigators went to see the pool. The investigators told the owner of the pool to get all of the water out from the pool. The owner of the pool was did as he was told.


When all of the water was out from the pool, the investigators saw, the body of Evelyn, Miss Elizabeth and a girl that died in the pool years ago. The girl was holding Miss Elizabeth’s and Evelyn’s feet…

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